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4.20.2018

test for poetry

Will the poem follow you? Will the poem affix itself to you? Will the poem inflect the course of your life?

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  1. Thirteen Ways a Poet Reads a Poem
    by Joseph Hutchison

    [A]

    1) I know what it’s doing,
    but I could make
    a poem myself
    that did the same.

    2) I know what it’s doing,
    and knowing I could
    never do it, I also know
    I’d never want to.

    3) Knowing what it’s doing,
    I know I could never
    make a poem do it
    but would kill if I could.

    4) I don’t know what
    it’s doing and suspect
    the poet also doesn’t have
    the faintest clue either.

    5) I don’t know what it’s doing,
    and my knocks at the door
    have gone unanswered,
    and there’s no welcome mat,
    no place at all to look for a key.

    6) Though I don’t know
    what it’s doing, I can’t stop
    re-reading it, beguiled
    by this dreamy commotion
    between my ears.

    [B]

    7) I know what my poem
    is doing but know,
    too, that any trained
    monkey could do it.

    8) I know what my poem
    is doing and yes, I never
    wanted it to do it but it’s
    doing it anyway.

    9) What I know about what
    my poem is doing, and what
    I don’t know about why,
    weigh the same, and I know
    I must honor that balance.

    10) What my poem is doing
    I don’t know, and moreover
    fear it may be onanistic,
    though maybe it’s only a way
    to pass time before the living end.

    11) I don’t know what it’s doing,
    my poem, and have thrown
    many pebbles in the night
    at my own bedroom window,
    in vain.

    12) My poem is doing something,
    though I don’t know what,
    but I keep rewriting it as if
    I knew why—lost in the dark
    bardo of that “as if”.

    [C]

    13) I know
    that I don’t know
    what I’m doing
    writing this.
    Et tu, Reader,
    reading it?
    If you do know,
    lend me your tongue!
    The suspense is
    killing me.

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    Yes, not really a poem ... nevertheless...

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  2. A kind of taxonomy of poetic approaches. And amusing too.

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