One bad move nullifies forty good ones.
—Bernhard Horwitz
One bad line nullifies forty good ones.
Showing posts with label substitution of terms. Show all posts
Showing posts with label substitution of terms. Show all posts
4.09.2026
8.01.2025
for the few
Ad from late 70s, early 1980s...
9 OUT OF EVERY 10,000 AMERICANS PREFER CAMPARI
9 out of every 10,000 Americans prefer Poetry.
9 OUT OF EVERY 10,000 AMERICANS PREFER CAMPARI
9 out of every 10,000 Americans prefer Poetry.
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1.06.2025
too narrow a margin
I have a truly marvelous demonstration of this proposition which this margin is too narrow to contain.
Fermat’s Last Theorem
I have a truly marvelous draft of this poem which this margin is too narrow to contain.
Fermat’s Last Poem
Fermat’s Last Theorem
I have a truly marvelous draft of this poem which this margin is too narrow to contain.
Fermat’s Last Poem
6.18.2024
secret secret
"A photograph is a secret about a secret."
—Diane Arbus
A poem is a secret about a secret.
—Diane Arbus
A poem is a secret about a secret.
3.07.2024
secrets of beauty
I have just seen at Picasso’s house a drawing on a large canvas that depicts a mass grave. It was as if the drawing was deepened by innumerable lines that the painter had previously erased. These lines bear witness to a search—not for a better line, but for the only line that will do.
Poetry is not holy just because it speaks of things that are holy. Poetry is not beautiful just because it speaks of things that are beautiful. If we are asked why it is beautiful and holy, we must answer as Joan of Arc did when she had been interrogated for too long: “Next question.”
Beauty is lame. Poetry is lame. It is from a struggle with the angel that the poet emerges—limping. This limp is what gives the poet his charm.
The masses can love a poet only by misunderstanding him.
Poetry works like lightning. Lightning strips a shepherd bare and carries his clothes several miles away. It imprints on a ploughman’s shoulder the photograph of a young girl. It can obliterate a wall and leave a tulle curtain untouched. In short, it creates unusual things. The poet’s strikes are no more premeditated than lightning.
A poet should be recognizable not by his style but by the way in which he looks at things.
At first a poet is not read at all. Then he is read badly. Then he becomes a classic, and habit prevents him from being read. Eventually, he retains his few early lovers for eternity.
A poet must not refuse honours, but he must see to it that no one thinks of offering them to him. If they are offered to him, it is because he has done something wrong. He must then accept the honours he is offered as a punishment.
[…]
This is what Erik Satie meant when he said, “It is not enough to refuse The Legion of Honour; you have not to deserve it.
All beautiful writing is automatic.
A poet’s laziness, waiting for voices: a dangerous attitude. It means that he isn’t doing what he needs in order to make the voices speak to him.
I used to use a detective agency’s advertisement to describe the figure of the poet: “Sees everything, hears everything, nobody suspects a thing.”
A poet never has enough freedom. Everything that he hoards turns against him. He is fortunate if somebody plunders him, dupes him, abandons him, ransacks his house, and drives him out of his home.
The poet has a truth of his own that people mistake for a lie. The poet is a lie that tells the truth.
The poet uses ornamentation to win people over and to seduce his readers. One day the ornamentation will fall away.
A poem always unravels too quickly. You have to tie and retie it firmly.
Seriousness that imposes: Never believe it. Never confuse it with gravity.
The canvas hates to be painted. The colours hate serving the painter, the paper hates the poem, and the ink hates us. What remains of these struggles is a battlefield, a famous date, a hero’s testimony.
Éluard’s clear water reflected the nature of his soul and so lovingly deformed it. Those who imitate him can only reflect a reflection.
Poetry is ill-served by people who live with their feet on the ground while wanting to look like dreamers. Poetry walks with one foot in life and one foot in death. That’s why I call it lame, and it is by its lameness that I recognize it.
I have noticed that one must write countless pages before a single word strikes a chord with a reader, or a single detail is remembered. The truth is that people will pass judgement on our house on as slight a basis as the catch on the door. This observation give me a sense of vertigo that makes me lazy.
Why do these thoughts come to me, to someone who is so reluctant to write? It’s probably because—having broken down in a street in Orléans—I am writing them on the move, in a third-class carriage that keeps jogging me. I reconnect with this dear work [of writing] on the endpapers of books, on the backs of envelopes, on tablecloths: a marvellous discomfort that stimulates the mind.*
—Jean Cocteau, selections from Secrets of Beauty (Eris, 2024; based on Éditions Gallimard, 2013), translated by Juliet Powys, with an introduction by Pierre Caizergues.
*The introduction states that this book of thoughts was composed in March 1945 on a journey back to Paris from the town of Anjouin. The car in which Cocteau was traveling broke down and was towed into Orléans, where he then took a train to Paris.
Poetry is not holy just because it speaks of things that are holy. Poetry is not beautiful just because it speaks of things that are beautiful. If we are asked why it is beautiful and holy, we must answer as Joan of Arc did when she had been interrogated for too long:
Beauty is lame. Poetry is lame. It is from a struggle with the angel that the poet emerges—limping. This limp is what gives the poet his charm.
The masses can love a poet only by misunderstanding him.
Poetry works like lightning. Lightning strips a shepherd bare and carries his clothes several miles away. It imprints on a ploughman’s shoulder the photograph of a young girl. It can obliterate a wall and leave a tulle curtain untouched. In short, it creates unusual things. The poet’s strikes are no more premeditated than lightning.
A poet should be recognizable not by his style but by the way in which he looks at things.
At first a poet is not read at all. Then he is read badly. Then he becomes a classic, and habit prevents him from being read. Eventually, he retains his few early lovers for eternity.
A poet must not refuse honours, but he must see to it that no one thinks of offering them to him. If they are offered to him, it is because he has done something wrong. He must then accept the honours he is offered as a punishment.
[…]
This is what Erik Satie meant when he said, “It is not enough to refuse The Legion of Honour; you have not to deserve it.
All beautiful writing is automatic.
A poet’s laziness, waiting for voices: a dangerous attitude. It means that he isn’t doing what he needs in order to make the voices speak to him.
I used to use a detective agency’s advertisement to describe the figure of the poet: “Sees everything, hears everything, nobody suspects a thing.”
A poet never has enough freedom. Everything that he hoards turns against him. He is fortunate if somebody plunders him, dupes him, abandons him, ransacks his house, and drives him out of his home.
The poet has a truth of his own that people mistake for a lie. The poet is a lie that tells the truth.
The poet uses ornamentation to win people over and to seduce his readers. One day the ornamentation will fall away.
A poem always unravels too quickly. You have to tie and retie it firmly.
Seriousness that imposes: Never believe it. Never confuse it with gravity.
The canvas hates to be painted. The colours hate serving the painter, the paper hates the poem, and the ink hates us. What remains of these struggles is a battlefield, a famous date, a hero’s testimony.
Éluard’s clear water reflected the nature of his soul and so lovingly deformed it. Those who imitate him can only reflect a reflection.
Poetry is ill-served by people who live with their feet on the ground while wanting to look like dreamers. Poetry walks with one foot in life and one foot in death. That’s why I call it lame, and it is by its lameness that I recognize it.
I have noticed that one must write countless pages before a single word strikes a chord with a reader, or a single detail is remembered. The truth is that people will pass judgement on our house on as slight a basis as the catch on the door. This observation give me a sense of vertigo that makes me lazy.
Why do these thoughts come to me, to someone who is so reluctant to write? It’s probably because—having broken down in a street in Orléans—I am writing them on the move, in a third-class carriage that keeps jogging me. I reconnect with this dear work [of writing] on the endpapers of books, on the backs of envelopes, on tablecloths: a marvellous discomfort that stimulates the mind.*
—Jean Cocteau, selections from Secrets of Beauty (Eris, 2024; based on Éditions Gallimard, 2013), translated by Juliet Powys, with an introduction by Pierre Caizergues.
*The introduction states that this book of thoughts was composed in March 1945 on a journey back to Paris from the town of Anjouin. The car in which Cocteau was traveling broke down and was towed into Orléans, where he then took a train to Paris.
2.26.2023
more than a game
Chess is beautiful enough to waste your life on.
—Hans Ree
Poetry is beautiful enough to waste your life on.
—Hans Ree
Poetry is beautiful enough to waste your life on.
11.27.2022
substitution of terms
When you see a good move, look for a better one.
—Emanuel Lasker
When you write a good line, look for a better one.
—Emanuel Lasker
When you write a good line, look for a better one.
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10.21.2022
substitution of terms
Anyone who thinks they can talk about quantum theory without feeling dizzy hasn't yet understood the first thing about it.
—Niels Bohr
Anyone who thinks they can talk about poetry without feeling dizzy hasn’t yet understood the first thing about it.
—Niels Bohr
Anyone who thinks they can talk about poetry without feeling dizzy hasn’t yet understood the first thing about it.
5.03.2022
first principle
The first principle of architectural beauty is that the essential lines of a construction be determined by a perfect appropriateness to its use.
—Gustave Eiffel
The first principle of poetic beauty is that the essential lines of a construction be determined by a perfect appropriateness to its effect.
—Gustave Eiffel
The first principle of poetic beauty is that the essential lines of a construction be determined by a perfect appropriateness to its effect.
4.09.2022
a certain relation
To photograph is to appropriate the thing photographed. It means putting oneself into a certain relation to the world that feels like knowledge—and, therefore, like power.
—Susan Sontag, “On Photography” (1977)
To write a poem is to appropriate the thing written about. It means putting oneself into a certain relation to the world that feels like knowledge—and, therefore, like power.
—Susan Sontag, “On Photography” (1977)
To write a poem is to appropriate the thing written about. It means putting oneself into a certain relation to the world that feels like knowledge—and, therefore, like power.
10.14.2021
three polish aphorisms
I had so much joy in my creations that there cannot be a question of merit.
—Jozef Pilsudski (1867-1935)
Tell me what books you have at home; I’ll tell you who you are.
—Jaroslaw Iwaszkiewicz (1894-1980)
Beyond each corner a number of new directions lie in wait.
—Stanislaw Jerzy Lec (1909-1966)
[Beyond each line-break a number of new directions lie in wait.]
A Treasury of Polish Aphorisms (Polish Heritage Publications, 1997) compiled and translated by Jacek Galazka
—Jozef Pilsudski (1867-1935)
Tell me what books you have at home; I’ll tell you who you are.
—Jaroslaw Iwaszkiewicz (1894-1980)
Beyond each corner a number of new directions lie in wait.
—Stanislaw Jerzy Lec (1909-1966)
[Beyond each line-break a number of new directions lie in wait.]
A Treasury of Polish Aphorisms (Polish Heritage Publications, 1997) compiled and translated by Jacek Galazka
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5.11.2020
stamp collecting
All science is either physics or stamp collecting.
—Ernest Rutherford
All poetry is either lyric or stamp collecting.
—Ernest Rutherford
All poetry is either lyric or stamp collecting.
12.12.2019
sing it, speak it
From a documentary on Fairport Convention, a musician quoted Martin Carthy as saying, “The worst thing you could do to a folk song is not to sing it.”
The worst thing you could do to a poem is not to speak it.
The worst thing you could do to a poem is not to speak it.
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2.26.2019
twisting tolstoy
Bad poems are all alike; every good poem is good in its own way.
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9.12.2018
what is time, what is poetry
For what is time? Who can easily and briefly explain it? Who even in thought can comprehend it, even to the pronouncing of a word concerning it? But what in speaking do we refer to more familiarly and knowingly than time? And certainly we understand when we speak of it; we understand also when we hear it spoken of by another. What, then, is time? If no one ask of me, I know; if I wish to explain to him who asks, I know not.
—Augustine of Hippo, Confessions, Book XI (ca. 400 CE)
For what is poetry? Who can easily and briefly explain it? Who even in thought can comprehend it, even to the pronouncing of a word concerning it? But what in speaking do we refer to more familiarly and knowingly than poetry? And certainly we understand when we speak of it; we understand also when we hear it spoken of by another. What, then, is poetry? If no one ask of me, I know; if I wish to explain to him who asks, I know not.
—Augustine of Hippo, Confessions, Book XI (ca. 400 CE)
For what is poetry? Who can easily and briefly explain it? Who even in thought can comprehend it, even to the pronouncing of a word concerning it? But what in speaking do we refer to more familiarly and knowingly than poetry? And certainly we understand when we speak of it; we understand also when we hear it spoken of by another. What, then, is poetry? If no one ask of me, I know; if I wish to explain to him who asks, I know not.
6.02.2018
cheap talk
"The cheaper the crook, the gaudier the patter."
Dashiell Hammett's detective Sam Spade in The Maltese Falcon (1930)
The cheaper the critic, the gaudier the patter.
Dashiell Hammett's detective Sam Spade in The Maltese Falcon (1930)
The cheaper the critic, the gaudier the patter.
10.23.2017
ship rebuilt while at sea
We are like sailors who on the open sea must reconstruct their ship but are never able to start afresh from the bottom. Where a beam is taken away a new one must at once be put there, and for this the rest of the ship is used as support. In this way, by using the old beams and driftwood the ship can be shaped entirely anew, but only by gradual reconstruction.
—Otto Neurath, Empiricism and Sociology, ed. Marie Neurath and Robert S. Cohen (Dordrecht: Reidel, 1973).
Poets are like sailors who on the open sea must reconstruct their ship but are never able to start afresh from the bottom. Where a beam is taken away a new one must at once be put there, and for this the rest of the ship is used as support. In this way, by using the old beams and driftwood the ship can be shaped entirely anew, but only by gradual reconstruction.
—Otto Neurath, Empiricism and Sociology, ed. Marie Neurath and Robert S. Cohen (Dordrecht: Reidel, 1973).
Poets are like sailors who on the open sea must reconstruct their ship but are never able to start afresh from the bottom. Where a beam is taken away a new one must at once be put there, and for this the rest of the ship is used as support. In this way, by using the old beams and driftwood the ship can be shaped entirely anew, but only by gradual reconstruction.
8.27.2016
terrifying in aspect
The Gauls are terrifying in aspect and their voices are deep and altogether harsh; when they meet together they converse with few words and in riddles, hinting darkly at things for the most part and using one word when they mean another; and they like to talk in superlatives, to the end that they may extol themselves and depreciate all other men. They are also boasters and threateners and are fond of pompous language, and yet they have sharp wits and are not without cleverness at learning.
—Diodorus Siculus, Library of History, Book V, Loeb Classical Library, 1939.
The Poets are terrifying in aspect and their voices are deep and altogether harsh; when they meet together they converse with few words and in riddles, hinting darkly at things for the most part and using one word when they mean another; and they like to talk in superlatives, to the end that they may extol themselves and depreciate all other writers. They are also boasters and theatrical and are fond of pompous language, and yet they have sharp wits and are not without cleverness at learning.
—Diodorus Siculus, Library of History, Book V, Loeb Classical Library, 1939.
The Poets are terrifying in aspect and their voices are deep and altogether harsh; when they meet together they converse with few words and in riddles, hinting darkly at things for the most part and using one word when they mean another; and they like to talk in superlatives, to the end that they may extol themselves and depreciate all other writers. They are also boasters and theatrical and are fond of pompous language, and yet they have sharp wits and are not without cleverness at learning.
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7.03.2016
as leaves
That if Poetry comes not as naturally as the leaves to a tree it had better not come at all.
—John Keats, letter to John Taylor (February 27, 1818)
That if publication comes not as naturally as the leaves to a tree it had better not come at all.
—John Keats, letter to John Taylor (February 27, 1818)
That if publication comes not as naturally as the leaves to a tree it had better not come at all.
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substitution of terms
6.24.2016
from one to another
You only have so many notes, and what makes a style is how you get from one note to another.
—Dizzy Gillespie*
You only have so many words, and what makes a style is how you get from one word to another.
*Quoted in J. D. McClatchy’s Sweet Theft: A poet’s commonplace book (Counterpoint Press, 2016)
—Dizzy Gillespie*
You only have so many words, and what makes a style is how you get from one word to another.
*Quoted in J. D. McClatchy’s Sweet Theft: A poet’s commonplace book (Counterpoint Press, 2016)
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j.d. mcclatchy,
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