4.20.2007

too late for that last line

You expected that that last line would save all it followed?

3 comments:

Anna Dabosh said...

I find that line interesting.
Is it, do you imagine, the first line that is the crux of the poem itself, instead of the last line saving the poem from itself?
It is an intersting thought.

Anna

JforJames said...

I'll have to think about your question no. Often there is duality in the aphoristic notion; it can be read two ways. In the simple sense I thought of how a poet will lean too heavily on the last line and try to use it to prop up what is otherwise not a strong offering.

Stu said...

I'm on a kind of world tour of poetry blogs, on the trail of all things risky, vivid and wonderful.

I'm enjoying the interplay between your musings and quotations. I like interplay, tension and contradiction between aphorisms. You're right that many can be read (at least) two ways. Agreeing and disagreeing with them feels like an edifying way to spend a Friday afternoon...