7.25.2009

word hoarder

I collect words, long lists of words that delight me, or words that might be useful, words of interest harvested from the writings of others, collected into an idiosyncratic lexicon.

7.24.2009

precipitous

From the title the poem fell off quickly.

7.23.2009

against entropy

A poem is language organized to resist entropy.

7.22.2009

through the palace wall

There is a hole in the palace wall.
A good poem is like that!

You never know what you might see.


—Tukaram (11th C., India)
Quoted in Robert McDowell’s Poetry As Spiritual Practice

7.21.2009

my loss

The languages I don’t know laugh at me. I would crawl on hands and knees to be in their company. (In today’s mail arrived a book I'd ordered. It carried the English title MODERN FRENCH POETS ON POETRY. Beautifully organized, but replete with great swaths of the untranslated French from many renowned French poets. I felt like putting my head down in the book and weeping for my loss.

7.20.2009

against guidebooks

Do we need another guidebook to tell poets what blank verse is or how many stresses are in a pentameter line? Because most poets can’t access the sources of their art, they write books that lapse into nomenclature and technical know-how. The best books about poetry, however strained and inarticulate, are those that try to explain what it takes to create a poem from the experiences of one’s life within the world in which one lives.

7.16.2009

low-responsibility MFA

The low-responsibility MFA program

In these stressful times for young adults there is a need for a new kind of MFA program. The low-responsibility MFA program puts the student in control his/her MFA experience. Students are encouraged but not required to fall into a curriculum that involves any or none of the following pursuits—
  • Getting a Tattoo: A Life-Long Accomplishment & Balancing One’s Piercings for Less Neck Pain

  • The Tardy Muse: Strategies for Killing Time While Waiting for Inspiration

  • Couch-Surfing Across America in the Kerouac Style

  • Libraries Are Labyrinths: Getting Lost in the Stacks for Fun (Bring a Snack)

  • Thrift-Store Safari: Developing A Good Eye for Bargains in Black

  • Go Green Ghost: No Car, No House, Means Minimal Environmental Impact (Carbon in Pencils is Okay)

  • Portrait of An Artist: Mastering the Slouch, the Pout, and the Ability to Stare Into Space for Hours on End

  • Weekly Playshops: The antiWorkshop for Playing With Words (Location & Time to Be Announced When The Spirit Moves)
Teachers and assigned mentors will keep their distance so as not to stifle the free-wheeling creativity of their students. Students will self-report their progress toward a degree and upon completion of their variable terms of study will optionally present ‘some ideas that they had for poems’ to the director. The director is authorized to grant degrees liberally and without prejudice in respect of the diversity of student experiences and the efforts they have not undertaken.

Tuition will be billed directly to a parental or guardian credit card. Sorry no refunds for early withdrawal or student’s inability to attend because there is no way to tell whether any student is around or not. Note: This school complies fully with ‘non-interference policy’ of The Federation.

7.15.2009

reckless

Always something reckless in the language of a great poem.

7.14.2009

poetry invented

If there were no poetry on any day in the world, poetry would be invented that day. For there would be an intolerable hunger. And from that need, from the relationships within ourselves and among ourselves as we went on living, and from every other expression of man’s nature, poetry would be—I cannot say invented or discovered—poetry would be derived.

—Muriel Rukeyser, The Life of Poetry (Wm. Morrow & Co., 1974)

7.13.2009

weight of the pieces

One should be able to infer from the fragments an important whole. Like the Elgin Marbles, one can sense the grandeur of the greater whole from which the pieces came.

7.09.2009

like water into light

The poem as osmosis mosaic.

7.08.2009

arguments with the masters

Mr. Wordsworth, I’m less interested in emotion recollected in tranquility and more inclined to emotion collected into a full ecstatic trance.

7.07.2009

no favor to the reader

One of those breathless hyperbolic introductions that no poet could or should have to read up to.

7.05.2009

bodying forth

We body forth our ideals in personal acts, either alone or with others in society. We body forth felt experience in a poem’s image and sound. We body forth our inner residence in the architecture of our homes and common buildings. We body forth our struggles and our revelations in the space of theatre. That is what form is: the bodying forth. The bodying forth of the living vessel in the shapes of clay.

—M.C. Richards, Centering: in Pottery, Poetry, and the Person (Wesleyan U. Press, 1969) [n.b.: M.C. stands for 'Mary Caroline']

7.01.2009

second generation

His poems were like Frank O’Hara’s except he didn’t work for MOMA and hang out with cool, cutting-edge artists in one of the most dynamic cities in the world.

6.30.2009

not a pretty sight

Representation that sears the gauze onto reality.

6.28.2009

one step ahead

Trust that the reader gets what you’re after just before you do.

6.27.2009

military parade

Why do all those regular stanzas remind me of a military parade?

6.26.2009

after heraklitas

One can’t wade into the same line of poetry twice.

6.24.2009

at the back of the mind

Muse poetry is composed at the back of the mind: an unaccountable product of a trance in which the emotions of love, fear, anger, or grief are profoundly engaged, though at the same time powerfully disciplined; in which intuitive thought reigns supralogically, and personal rhythm subdues metre to its purposes. The effect on the readers of Muse poetry, which its opposite poles of ecstasy and melancholia, is what the French call a frisson, and the Scots call a ‘grue’—meaning the shudder provoked by fearful or supernatural experiences.

—Robert Graves, “The Dedicated Poet,” Oxford Addresses on Poetry (Doubleday & Co., 1962)

6.22.2009

too thinned

A poem pared to air.

6.20.2009

house slippers

The lines padded along in soft iambs as though written in house slippers.

6.18.2009

years of mystical thinking

So much mysticism surrounds ‘the linebreak’ in free verse poetics.

6.16.2009

storied song

A lyric clad in narrative.

6.15.2009

prose poem

Prose poem: A poem comfortable with the right margin.

6.14.2009

empire of chimeras

Horace was not one of these who believe that the caprice of the poet suffers no law above itself. In modern times, Young sounded the tocsin of Pseudo-Romanticism, when he declared that “in the fairy-land of fancy genius may wander wild; there it has a creative power, and may reign arbitrarily over its own empire of chimeras.” The poet, indeed, can create a world of his own, and, if he is endowed with the true genius of the poet, can insure our belief in his creation. But, even the poet must not offend our sense of congruity by endeavouring to unite things that are essentially incompatible. Horace would have no sympathy with the false Romanticism which could bring into being a world of chimeras having no conceivable relation with existing experience. Such things he would regard as the fevered dreams of a diseased imagination. He would thus look askance at the riot of imagination, and the unfettered play of emotion, which many regard as the divine prerogative of poets.
…
In a later passage of the Ars Poetica, he seems to go still further, when he insists that the poet’s fictions be “proxima veris.” [435-436]

—J. F. D’Alton, Roman Literary Theory & Criticism (Russell & Russell, 1962)

6.13.2009

no middleground

A metaphor that wouldn’t meet halfway.

6.10.2009

kitchen sink songs

Just another kitchen-sink Cantos.

6.09.2009

experience shaped

Experience shaped expression. Too much poetry is written from the realm of reading.

6.07.2009

uncritic

Critic without a cause.

6.06.2009

what mattered

It was not important that [the poems] survive.
What mattered was that they should bear
Some lineament or character,

Some affluence, if only half-perceived,
In the poverty of their words,
Of the planet of which they were part.


—Wallace Stevens, from “The Planet On The Table”

6.05.2009

shadow presence

Metaphor: from the shadow of a thing emerges another thing long hidden.

6.04.2009

sink hole

A line that stepped unsurely over its caesura.

6.02.2009

r.i.p.

His ideal reader died.

6.01.2009

free radical

In chemistry the ‘radical’ (e.g., an atom without a paired electron) tends to be very reactive. We try to find certain words that have an unpaired electron, so to speak, that will attract and create the reaction that is metaphor, two things binding as they react to (and against) one another and if not creating a chemical reaction per se, creating a strong mental or emotional response in us.

5.29.2009

not what is seen

The underside of a leaf
Cool in shadow
Sublimely unemphatic
Smiling of innocence

The frailest stems
Quivering in light
Bend and break
In silence

This poem like the paintings, is not really about nature. It is not what is seen. It is what is known forever in the mind.

—Agnes Martin, "Notes," Writings / Schriften (Kunstmuseum Winterthur / Edition Cantz, 1992) edited by Herausgegeben von Dieter Schwarz

5.27.2009

no compromise

To not compromise the poetry through the fit and finish of composition.

5.26.2009

welcoming community

The heckler at the poetry reading was invited to come back next week to enter the slam.

5.25.2009

small chevalier

Lowering one’s flimsy lance, charging uphill at the literary windmill of the great poet’s reputation. But no one’s inside anyway, and you look small due to scale.

5.24.2009

dazzle draft

Unable to see beyond the dazzle of the first draft.

5.22.2009

concealed criticism

When one speaks of criticism, one is generally thinking of prose. But, when we speak of Arnold’s criticism, it is necessary to widen the scope of one’s observation; for he was never more essentially a critic than when he concealed the true character of his method in the guise of poetry. Even if we decline to accept his strange judgment that all poetry “is at bottom a criticism of life,” still we must perceive that, as a matter of fact, many of his own poems are as essentially critical as his Essays or his Lectures.

—G.W.E. Russell, Matthew Arnold (Chas. Scribner’s Sons, 1904)

5.21.2009

oh too pleased

A reader a little oh too pleased with his poetry.

5.19.2009

hit it

From the first line the poem was pedal down.

5.18.2009

orator extraordinaire

Slam poet, be a superhero whose power is oratory.

5.17.2009

sharp salient

A poem spiked on the salient of a single line.

5.16.2009

few or many

There are poets who readily have a few poems that speak for them, that make their reputations, and then there are those poets who exist only in oeuvre, only after reading the body of work can one see fully their achievement.

5.15.2009

weather report

There is a weather report in almost every folk poem. The sun is shining; it was snowing; the wind was blowing…The folk poet knows that it’s wise to immediately establish the connection between the personal and the cosmic.

—Charles Simic, The Monster Loves His Labyrinth: Notebooks (Ausable Press, 2008)

5.14.2009

cease and desestina

A cease and desestina order had to be issued against the rime-crazed poet.

5.13.2009

post-facto ticket

Poetry readings are often free admission. When you buy the poet’s book on the way out, it’s sort of like purchasing a post facto ticket.

5.11.2009

fit for song

A poem that would have to dumb itself down before it could become a song.

5.10.2009

holy icon

An image with the aura of a holy icon.

5.07.2009

irregularity

       When the Chinese made
a circle of stones on the top of their wells
one would be a little skewed to make the circle
look more round. Irregularity is the secret
of music and to the voice of great poetry.

—Jack Gilbert
from “The Secret,” The Dance Most of All (Alfred A. Knopf, 2009)

5.06.2009

acceptable poem

My poem was accepted. It’s perfectly acceptable, if unexceptional. The poem has mastered the secret handshake and matches well with editorial tastes. The poem thus conforms to the fashions of the times, securing its acceptability into the good company of its fellow poems. In other words, my poem goes along to get along.

5.04.2009

only poetry

When everything is stripped away, as after a disaster, and one is left with nothing but language, then, then one has poetry.

5.03.2009

lost count of

How many poems have I lost to alcohol or sloth?

5.01.2009

against is all

They who can’t define their art other than in antithesis.

4.30.2009

to incite a caring

One can say anything to language. This is why it is a listener, closer to us than any silence or any god. Yet its very openness often signifies indifference. (The indifference of language is continually solicited and employed in bulletins, legal records, communiqués, files.) Poetry addresses language in such a way as to close this indifference and to incite a caring.

—John Berger, “The Hour of Poetry,” Selected Essays (Vintage, 2001)

4.29.2009

far too puny

Language was far too puny for his great theology:
But, oh! His thought strode through those words
Bright as the conquering Christ…

—Thomas Merton, from “Duns Scotus,” The Collected Poems of Thomas Merton (New Directions, 1980)

4.28.2009

creative writing

The creative writing professor crafted lovely glowing introductions for the famous visiting writers.

4.27.2009

sweet spiel

Poet, be a salesperson with a sweet spiel and a hard close.

4.26.2009

jailbreak

Ruled notebook: Frustrated, I turn it on its side and begin to write. The words hanging on the bars of the cage, biding their time for a jailbreak.

4.23.2009

what books are made of

Sunt bona, sunt quaedam mediocria, sunt plura mala, quae legis hic: aliter non fit, Avite, liber.

Here you'll read some good things, some so-so, and a number of bad. There’s not another way, Avitus, to make a book.

—Martial, Epigrammata, XV, 16

4.21.2009

singing in between

In the lyric even the interstices sing.

4.19.2009

one look

A poet gazes the world in the glance of a single line.

4.16.2009

low-yield process

The refining into language of what was raw imagination.

4.15.2009

craftwork

What some call craft I’d call a taking care.

4.14.2009

poet game

I watched my country turn into
a coast-to-coast strip mall
and I cried out in a song:
if we could do all that in thirty years,
then please tell me you all -
why does good change take so long?
Why does the color of your skin
or who you choose to love
still lead to such anger and pain?
And why do I think it's any help
for me to still dream of
playing the poet game?

—Greg Brown, "The Poet Game" (Red House Records, 1994)

4.11.2009

everyone's doing it

Everyone reads fiction but everyone writes poetry.

4.09.2009

unruly

The lyric obeys no rules: emotions unleashing the language from the laws of usage and semantic convention.

4.08.2009

fragile lines

As though written on tissue paper the poem felt as if it could come apart at any moment.

4.07.2009

usual suspect

The poet had opportunity and motif.

4.06.2009

strange terms

Chiefly because our pauper-speech must find
Strange terms to fit the strangeness of the thing;
Yet worth of thine and the expected joy
Of thy sweet friendship do persuade me on
To bear all toil and wake the clear nights through,
Seeking with what of words and what of song
I may at last most gloriously uncloud
For thee the light beyond, wherewith to view
The core of being at the centre hid.

—Titus Lucretius Carus, “Of The Nature Of Things”
(translation by Wm. Ellery Leonard)

4.05.2009

language algebra

The line was language algebra: a formula devoid of the phenomenal.

4.04.2009

skin deep

A test for a line of poetry: Could you live with these words as a tattoo?

4.02.2009

organizing principle

A word array that must ultimately well up as speech.