10.21.2014
parasite adjectives
There are many dangerous adjectives, being naturally parasitic of certain nouns.
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adjectives,
dangerous,
nouns,
parasite,
parasitic
10.20.2014
stop sign
In order not to fear the period, the writer must think of it as a way station or jumping off place.
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block,
fear,
period,
punctuation,
stop,
way station
10.16.2014
10.14.2014
essential reins
Imagination, like wild horses, pulls hard and fast under the reins of reality.
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horses,
imagination,
reality,
reins,
wild
10.13.2014
10.12.2014
sound architecture
One very often finds that in a Moore poem every phrase is load-bearing. This is sound architecture, the weight brilliantly distributed.
—Maureen N. McLane, “My Marianne Moore,” My Poets (Farrar, Straus & Giroux, 2012)
—Maureen N. McLane, “My Marianne Moore,” My Poets (Farrar, Straus & Giroux, 2012)
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architecture,
load-bearing,
marianne moore,
maureen n. mclane,
phrase,
sound,
weight
10.08.2014
hidden in the negative space
All the words and passages cut away from the poem form a shadow poem that seems to stalk the final draft.
10.05.2014
intermittent narrator
The journal is only the form of memoir I can abide, being piecemeal, fragmentary, sequential only in fits & starts, like life.
10.03.2014
low bar
The only writer I ever knew who actually washed out of his MFA.
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creative writing program,
MFA,
washed out
10.01.2014
lesser editions
Book collectors seek nearly unread first editions. I love finding a dog-eared, beaten, heavily marked edition. I know then I’m in good company.
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book collector,
books,
dog-eared,
first edition
9.30.2014
9.29.2014
strong pair
Compound words: The power of coupled words that rivals metaphor.
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compound words,
metaphor
9.26.2014
poet within the poet
What is probably new and startling in the work of Dylan Thomas is that, in dragging into light his versions of “the hidden causes” which he mentions, he has given an articulate voice to other parts of the body than the romantic heart—to the glands and the nerves, that is—and has, in considerable measure, freed them from the poetically sterile reason.
[…]
Although he is suitably interested in most phases of life, his impulse comes primarily from within his own body. He is the poet within the poet, and is generally dependent upon no externalities for his subject. This, then, I would say, is one of his main contributions to poetry: he has given voices and eyes to the part of the being which had formerly been dumb and blind; he has given the body a poetic aura…
—Henry Treece, Dylan Thomas: Dog Among the Fairies (Lindsay Drummond Ltd., 1949)
[…]
Although he is suitably interested in most phases of life, his impulse comes primarily from within his own body. He is the poet within the poet, and is generally dependent upon no externalities for his subject. This, then, I would say, is one of his main contributions to poetry: he has given voices and eyes to the part of the being which had formerly been dumb and blind; he has given the body a poetic aura…
—Henry Treece, Dylan Thomas: Dog Among the Fairies (Lindsay Drummond Ltd., 1949)
9.25.2014
pace coleridge
Available words in the only possible order that would be a poem.
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available,
definition,
order,
poetry is,
samuel taylor coleridge,
words
9.24.2014
pristine copy
I saw an inscribed copy of your book at the Goodwill. It was in excellent (likely unread) condition, I must say.
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book collector,
poetry book,
publication,
readers,
unread
9.23.2014
9.21.2014
32 feet per second per second
Are the gaps in the poem capable of being bridged by the mind or are they meant to be moments of mental free fall?
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bridge,
comprehension,
free fall,
gap,
mind
9.20.2014
recycled crit
The kind of criticism that recycles familiar quotes and formulaic clichés of poetics, and thus uncovers nothing original, gives us nothing from which to learn.
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bad criticism,
criticism,
original,
quotes,
recycled
9.17.2014
one conversation
Much has the human experienced.
Named many of the heavenly ones,
Since we have been a conversation
And can hear from one another.*
From these verses, let us first select one that immediately fits into the context so far: “Since we have been a conversation…” We—human beings—are a conversation. Human Being is grounded in language; but first properly occurs in conversation. This, however, is just one way in which language takes place; language is only essential as conversation.
[…]
Yet Hölderlin says: “Since we have been a conversation and can hear from one another.” Being able to hear is not merely a consequence of speaking with one another, but is instead the condition for this. Even being able to hear is itself in turn based upon the possibility of the word, and needs it. Being able to talk and being able to hear are equally originary. We are a conversation—and that means we are able to hear from one another. We are a conversation, and that also always means: We are one conversation.
—Martin Heidegger, “Hölderlin and the Essence of Poetry,” Heidegger Reader (Indiana University Press, 2009)
*lines from an unfinished poem by Hölderlin
Named many of the heavenly ones,
Since we have been a conversation
And can hear from one another.*
From these verses, let us first select one that immediately fits into the context so far: “Since we have been a conversation…” We—human beings—are a conversation. Human Being is grounded in language; but first properly occurs in conversation. This, however, is just one way in which language takes place; language is only essential as conversation.
[…]
Yet Hölderlin says: “Since we have been a conversation and can hear from one another.” Being able to hear is not merely a consequence of speaking with one another, but is instead the condition for this. Even being able to hear is itself in turn based upon the possibility of the word, and needs it. Being able to talk and being able to hear are equally originary. We are a conversation—and that means we are able to hear from one another. We are a conversation, and that also always means: We are one conversation.
—Martin Heidegger, “Hölderlin and the Essence of Poetry,” Heidegger Reader (Indiana University Press, 2009)
*lines from an unfinished poem by Hölderlin
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being,
conversation,
friedrich hölderlin,
hear,
martin heidegger,
speak,
word
9.16.2014
come from afar
To be a poet from another planet.
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aspiration,
charge,
different,
lives of the poets,
planet
9.13.2014
less is more
A perfect short poem that could‘ve been written on the lint from one’s pocket.
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less is more,
lint,
pocket,
small poem
9.10.2014
no mean feat
Capable poets all struggling to be consequential.
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capable,
consequential,
importance,
lives of the poets
9.08.2014
gods gone to ground
The more you know of the masters the less you are impressed.
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apprenticeship,
impressed,
knowledge,
masters
9.07.2014
amoebic ambit
With an amoebic ambit, my love of art is capacious, not being one who draws or respects lines as boundaries.
9.06.2014
to fill the silence
Many individual voices rise again in the dusk. Yeats dead, Pound silenced, Eliot lost to the theatre, Thomas gone before his time—it is the hour of the twittering machines. We listen to them as we drink our martinis or smoke a cigarette, and for an hour or two we feel content. Then the night comes and there is no voice to fill the silence. That is not as used to be. Poetry used to be in speech, in transaction, in worship; at the banquet, before the battle, in the moment of birth and burial. Why is poetry no longer our daily bread? We have to search for an answer to this question, and the search leads us to the foundations of our society. We have the poetry we deserve, just as we have the painting we deserve, the music we deserve; and if it is fragmented, personal, spasmodic, we have only to look around us to see the satanic chaos through which nevertheless a few voices have penetrated. The voices are pitched high and may sometimes sound discordant; but the image they convey has crystalline brightness and hardness, and cannot be shrouded.
—Herbert Read, “The Image in Modern English Poetry,” The Tenth Muse (Horizon Press, 1957)
—Herbert Read, “The Image in Modern English Poetry,” The Tenth Muse (Horizon Press, 1957)
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bread,
chaos,
deserve,
discordant,
fragment,
herbert read,
image,
silence
9.05.2014
desperate apotheosis
The apotheosis of Romantic poetry came after the age was over in the form of Dylan Thomas. An apotheosis is often that desperate late flowering.
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apotheosis,
desperate,
dylan thomas,
flowering,
romantic poetry,
the age
9.04.2014
it's like uhmm
Aspire to a style that can’t be adequately described.
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description,
style,
unique
9.03.2014
somehow fits
Somehow a poem makes human experience conform to the meager means of the word.
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experience,
means,
word
9.02.2014
stream of story and theme
The same stories and themes follow us because we as a society are constantly breaking camp and moving on.
9.01.2014
8.30.2014
both philatelist and pirate
He wrote his poems against the gravity of language. Images, therefore, speak in his poetry solely on his behalf.
[…]
He was almost a philatelist with words. (He saw, long before we did, the fact that the boundaries of language are the boundaries of the world.)
[…]
A man of the Golden Age. “Poeta pirata est,” he would say?
From “Oktay Rifat”
—Ilhan Berk, Selected Poems by Ilhan Berk (Talisman House, 2004), edited and translation by Önder Otçu.
[…]
He was almost a philatelist with words. (He saw, long before we did, the fact that the boundaries of language are the boundaries of the world.)
[…]
A man of the Golden Age. “Poeta pirata est,” he would say?
From “Oktay Rifat”
—Ilhan Berk, Selected Poems by Ilhan Berk (Talisman House, 2004), edited and translation by Önder Otçu.
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boundaries,
gravity,
ilhan berk,
images,
langauge,
philatelist,
pirate,
turkish poetry,
words
8.29.2014
8.28.2014
unfortunate pub date
His book was released in the fall of 2001, while the world was otherwise occupied.
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9/11,
attention,
history,
publication,
world
8.27.2014
more than was asked
A poet who had smart answers to even the daft questions posed by the interviewer.
8.26.2014
meditation train
However discursive/recursive, a meditation must retain its momentum.
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discursive,
meditation,
momentum,
recursive
under the hull
Reading a beautiful but obscure poem, like gliding over a shimmery surface trying to read the weeds swaying in the currents below.
8.24.2014
lithic in their singleness
There are certain poems I have long thought of as “pebbles”: small, a little intractable, lithic in their singleness of perception. Like an actual pebble, cold until warmed by an exterior heat source; like an actual pebble, unwavering in outlook and replete in simple thusness. The conception of this term, I’m sure, bows more than a little in the direction of Zbigniew Herbert’s famous poem; but I recognized the type long before reading his
“Pebble”…
—Jane Hirshfield, “Skipping Stones,” Circumference is My Business: Poets on Influence and Mastery (Paul Dry Books, 2001), edited by Stephen Berg.
—Jane Hirshfield, “Skipping Stones,” Circumference is My Business: Poets on Influence and Mastery (Paul Dry Books, 2001), edited by Stephen Berg.
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heat,
jane hirshfield,
lithic,
pebble,
singleness,
zbigniew herbert
8.22.2014
trapdoor word
Just when he thought he’d painted himself into a corner with his style, he found an unexpected word, and through that trapdoor he escaped.
8.21.2014
8.19.2014
low coverage area
A high ratio of white space to printed text. [Scientific definition of a poem.]
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definition,
print,
ratio,
text,
white space
8.18.2014
remaining words
Don't be afraid to forget some words. Nor worry if they don't come to you. There are too many words for the purposes of a poet.
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composition,
forget,
vocabulary,
words
8.17.2014
mythic figure
The common reader and other mythological creatures.
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common reader,
myth,
mythological creature,
reading
8.16.2014
timing and spacing
The English language is like a broad river on whose bank a few patient anglers are sitting, while, higher up, the stream is being polluted by a string of refuse-barges tipping out their muck. The English language has, in fact, so contracted to our own littleness that it is no longer possible to make a good book out of words alone. A writer must concentrate on his vocabulary but must also depend on the order, the timing and spacing of his words, and try to arrange them in a form which is seemingly artless, yet perfectly proportioned. He must let a hiatus suggest that which language will no longer accomplish. Words today are like the shells and rope of seaweed which a child brings home glistening from the beach and which in an hour have lost their lustre.
—Cyril Connolly, The Unquiet Grave: A Word Cycle by Palinurus (Persea Press, 1981; first published in Curwen Press in 1944)
—Cyril Connolly, The Unquiet Grave: A Word Cycle by Palinurus (Persea Press, 1981; first published in Curwen Press in 1944)
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arrangement,
cyril connolly,
English,
hiatus,
lustre,
quote,
shells,
spacing,
timing,
vocabulary,
words
8.14.2014
under the influence
That fine line between riffing off, and ripping off.
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influence,
plagiarism,
riffing,
theft
8.11.2014
the stacks
They say it’s the age of the end of the book. Yet, at major libraries, you have to show your bona fides, then fill out a form and wait for someone to retrieve that book you wanted from the stacks.
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credentials,
end of the book,
library,
stacks
8.10.2014
didactic art
All good art is didactic. In that good art moves us or it makes us think, and thus it shapes our lives. Bad art is art without influence over its intended audience.
8.09.2014
poets' opinions
Poets can’t be trusted when it comes to their opinions of their contemporaries. Their lack of distance causes deafness to rival voices or results in a chummy humming in tune.
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blurbs,
contemporaries,
contemporary poets,
deafness,
humming,
opinion,
reviews,
rival,
voices
8.06.2014
city of words
Poetry is a city of words, a complex heterogeneity that functions both as its parts and as a whole. It’s full of systems—metaphoric, symbolic, sonic—analogous to the sewage, electrical, and transportation systems that animate a city. You look at a jagged skyline, and see the ragged right margin; you read through the quick shifts of much contemporary poetry, and think of a busy intersection in which your view is cut off by a bus one moment, then opened up the next, and then filled with a crowd crossing the street the next.
—Cole Swenson, "Poetry City," Identity Theory, (Oct. 26, 2004, identitytheory.com)
—Cole Swenson, "Poetry City," Identity Theory, (Oct. 26, 2004, identitytheory.com)
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city,
cole swenson,
poetry is,
right margin,
skyline,
street,
words
8.05.2014
nor song nor poem
The poem will never be as simple as the song. The song will never be as nuanced as the poem.
8.04.2014
writer's retreat
She got a small grant that allowed her to live for a year and to write. At the end of it, she felt a low-wage job may have been a better move for her writing.
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lives of the poets,
low-wage job,
real world
8.03.2014
imaginative limit
Imagination at its height forgets (or ignores) reality, and in that moment it fails utterly.
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forget,
ignore,
imagination,
reality
8.02.2014
parasite found
A poet is one who’d rather find a tick on his body than a typo in his published poem.
7.31.2014
no beginning and no end
A poet who fell in love with her process at the peril of all else.
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composition,
process
7.30.2014
7.29.2014
created an equivalent
I simply function when I take a picture. I do not photograph with preconceived notions about life. I put down what I have to say when I must. That is my role, according to my own way of feeling it. Perhaps it is beyond feeling.
What is of greatest importance is to hold a moment, to record something so completely that those who see it will relive an equivalent* of what has been expressed.
[…]
I want solely to make an image of what I have seen, not of what it means to me. It is only after I have created an equivalent of what moved me that I can begin to think about its significance.
Shapes, as such, do not interest me unless they happen to be an outer equivalent of something already taking form within me. To many, shapes matter in their own right. As I see it, this has nothing to do with photography, but with the merely literary or pictorial.
—Alfred Stieglitz, quoted by Dorothy Norman in Alfred Stieglitz (The History of Photography Series, Aperture, Inc., 1976).
*After 1922 Stieglitz used the term "Equivalents" to describe his photographic series of clouds.
What is of greatest importance is to hold a moment, to record something so completely that those who see it will relive an equivalent* of what has been expressed.
[…]
I want solely to make an image of what I have seen, not of what it means to me. It is only after I have created an equivalent of what moved me that I can begin to think about its significance.
Shapes, as such, do not interest me unless they happen to be an outer equivalent of something already taking form within me. To many, shapes matter in their own right. As I see it, this has nothing to do with photography, but with the merely literary or pictorial.
—Alfred Stieglitz, quoted by Dorothy Norman in Alfred Stieglitz (The History of Photography Series, Aperture, Inc., 1976).
*After 1922 Stieglitz used the term "Equivalents" to describe his photographic series of clouds.
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alfred stieglitz,
equivalent,
feeling,
form,
moment,
photography,
preconceived,
shapes
7.28.2014
go at it like that
Like words gouged into stone with fingernails.
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fingernails,
gouge,
stakes,
stone
7.27.2014
slave labor language
Language easily becomes enslaved by falling into its habitual and customary means of expression. The poet breaks those word chains.
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chains,
enslaved,
expression,
habitual,
language
7.26.2014
everything mien
A poet who scoffs at the uncontainability of the cosmos.
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ambition,
attitude,
cosmos,
uncontainability
7.25.2014
7.24.2014
silent tribute
Cavafy was as reticent and decorous in conversation as he was outspoken in his poetry—some things, he said, needed art to make them beautiful. But it is related that if a beautiful face showed itself in his house, he paid it the silent tribute of lighting another candle.
—Robert Liddell, “Studies in Genius, VII – Cavafy,” Horizon, Vol XVIII, 105, 1948.
—Robert Liddell, “Studies in Genius, VII – Cavafy,” Horizon, Vol XVIII, 105, 1948.
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art,
beauty,
c.p. cavafy,
candle,
conversation,
decorous,
face,
house,
reticent,
tribute
7.23.2014
ta-tum-ta-tum...
It takes more than regular meter to give a heartbeat to a poem.
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beat,
heart,
heart beat,
meter,
regular
7.22.2014
image machine
Perhaps the ascendance of the camera pushed painting to explore abstraction.
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abstraction,
art,
camera,
painting,
photography,
technology
7.21.2014
poetry third
The secret of being a great poet lies in having an abiding interest in the world and in humankind, and not in one’s attention to poetry.
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attention,
great poet,
humankind,
secret,
world
7.20.2014
7.18.2014
mind the gap
Recall that audio admonishment inside the London Underground, ‘Mind the gap’: A metaphor’s power is ‘the gap’; and the mind must leap that gap.
7.17.2014
embrace the anarchic
To make life...to create interest and vividness, it is necessary to break form, to distort pattern, to change the nature of our civilization. In order to create it is necessary to destroy; and the agent of destruction in society is the poet. I believe that the poet is necessarily an anarchist, and that he must oppose all organized conceptions of the State, not only those which we inherit from the past, but equally those which are imposed on people in the name of the future.
—Herbert Read, Poetry and Anarchism (Faber and Faber, 1938)
—Herbert Read, Poetry and Anarchism (Faber and Faber, 1938)
7.16.2014
broken box
A poem is a genre wrecking literary instrument.
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box,
genre,
intrument,
literary form,
poem is
7.15.2014
derived value
Perhaps the poem is a derivative product; its value pegged to human experience.
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derivative,
experience,
human,
poem is,
product
7.14.2014
executable file
It may show up attached as .doc or .pdf, but a poem is really an .exe file.
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computer age,
poem is,
software
7.13.2014
7.11.2014
cased the joint
He cased the poem thoroughly like a good critic always does.
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cased,
critic,
critical reading,
noir
7.10.2014
exploded world
Critics talking about ‘supertechnology’ and ‘the mediated eye’ in the seventies and eighties couldn’t know they were living in the Stone Age.
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criticism,
critics,
perspective,
stone age,
time
7.09.2014
subtleties of the game
Gradually, in what at first had been purely mechanical repetitions of the championship matches, an artistic, pleasurable understanding began to awaken in me. I learned to understand the subtleties of the game [chess], the tricks and ruses of attack and defense, I grasped the technique of thinking ahead, combination, counter-attack, and soon I could recognize the personal style of every grandmaster as infallibly from his own way of playing a game as you can identify a poet’s verses from only a few lines.
—Stefan Zweig, Chess (Penguin Mini Modern Classics, 2011: Copyright Stephan Zweig 1943; translation copyright by Anthea Bell, 2006)
—Stefan Zweig, Chess (Penguin Mini Modern Classics, 2011: Copyright Stephan Zweig 1943; translation copyright by Anthea Bell, 2006)
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chess,
game,
quote,
stefan zweig,
style,
subtleties,
understanding
7.04.2014
7.01.2014
numbing mumble
Academic speak lacking the least spark of insight.
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academic writing,
insight,
literary criticism,
spark
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