9.15.2025
9.14.2025
9.12.2025
it works that way
It wasn’t the poem I meant to write, but it was the poem I did write.
Labels:
composition,
intention,
outcome,
process
9.10.2025
trunk of a tree
When the substance of a composition, trunk of a tree, is by Truth sustained,
Style aids it to branch into leafy boughs and bear fruit.
Indeed, feeling and expression should never fail to correspond,
As each emotional change wears a new complexion on a sensitive face.
Thought that swells with joy bursts into laughter;
When grief is spoken, words reverberate with endless sighs;
No matter if the work be accomplished in one flash on the page,
Or is the result of the most deliberate brush.
—Lu Chi (261- 303), “The Working Process,” Essay on Literature (translated by Shih-Hsiang Chen), Anthology of Chinese Literature: from early times to the fourteenth century (Grove Press, 1965), edited by Cyril Birch. [This essay was written in rhymed-prose and was composed three years before Lu Chi was executed during a power struggle of the Chin court.]
Style aids it to branch into leafy boughs and bear fruit.
Indeed, feeling and expression should never fail to correspond,
As each emotional change wears a new complexion on a sensitive face.
Thought that swells with joy bursts into laughter;
When grief is spoken, words reverberate with endless sighs;
No matter if the work be accomplished in one flash on the page,
Or is the result of the most deliberate brush.
—Lu Chi (261- 303), “The Working Process,” Essay on Literature (translated by Shih-Hsiang Chen), Anthology of Chinese Literature: from early times to the fourteenth century (Grove Press, 1965), edited by Cyril Birch. [This essay was written in rhymed-prose and was composed three years before Lu Chi was executed during a power struggle of the Chin court.]
Labels:
brush,
chinese literature,
composition,
deliberate,
expression,
feeling,
flash,
lu chi,
style,
trunk,
truth
9.07.2025
9.06.2025
anything goes
In poetry anything is permitted, which both holds it open to discovery and stirs it into chaos.
Labels:
chaos,
discovery,
genre defying,
permited,
poetic license
9.05.2025
inner workings
As with wrist watches, some poems show their mechanisms while the workings of others are covered.
Labels:
covered,
mechanisms,
show,
watch,
workings,
wrist watch
9.04.2025
lost art
Losing one’s art while striving to be recognized as an artist: Making all the right self-promotional and professional moves, but not attending to the soul-work.
Labels:
artist is,
professional,
recognition,
self promotion,
soul-work
9.02.2025
hats and coats
There is such a thing as Literary Fashion, and prose and verse have been regulated by the same caprice that cuts our coats and cocks our hats.
—Isaac D’Israeli, in the essay “Literary Fashions,” Curiosities of Literature, Vol. II (of 3). Edited, With Memoir And Notes, By His Son, The Earl Of Beaconsfield
—Isaac D’Israeli, in the essay “Literary Fashions,” Curiosities of Literature, Vol. II (of 3). Edited, With Memoir And Notes, By His Son, The Earl Of Beaconsfield
Labels:
caprice,
coats,
fashion,
hats,
isaac d'israeli
9.01.2025
8.30.2025
mistaken evaluation
It’s impossible for most poets to recognize that they’ve written something of little worth.
Labels:
recognize,
self-awareness,
value,
worth
8.28.2025
thoughtful poem
One of those I-think-this-I-think-that poems.
Labels:
digress,
stream of consciousness,
thinking,
thought
8.25.2025
alive like that
Model for a poem: A late summer field full of weeds and wildflowers, visited by butterflies and birds.
8.22.2025
8.20.2025
perceptible disappearnances
It is poetry that remarks on the barely perceptible disappearances from our world such as that of the sleeping porch or the root cellar. And poetry that notes the barely perceptible appearances.
[…]
Poets should exceed themselves—when demands on us are slack, we should be anything but. Pressing the demands of the word forward is not only relevant but urgent. If our country does not vigorously cultivate poetry, it is either poetry’s ineluctable time to wither or time to make a promise on its own behalf to put out new shoots and insist on a much bigger pot.
—C.D. Wright, from “Collaborating,” The Essential C.D. Wright (Cooper Canyon, 2025), edited by Forrest Gander and Michael Wiegers, 119-120
[…]
Poets should exceed themselves—when demands on us are slack, we should be anything but. Pressing the demands of the word forward is not only relevant but urgent. If our country does not vigorously cultivate poetry, it is either poetry’s ineluctable time to wither or time to make a promise on its own behalf to put out new shoots and insist on a much bigger pot.
—C.D. Wright, from “Collaborating,” The Essential C.D. Wright (Cooper Canyon, 2025), edited by Forrest Gander and Michael Wiegers, 119-120
8.18.2025
8.17.2025
8.15.2025
8.14.2025
8.13.2025
8.12.2025
lonely pleasure
Often have I sighed to measure
By myself a lonely pleasure,
Sighed to think I read a book
Only read, perhaps, by me.
—William Wordsworth, “To the Small Celandine (Common Pilewort); To the Same Flower,” The Poetical Works of William Wordsworth, p.338
By myself a lonely pleasure,
Sighed to think I read a book
Only read, perhaps, by me.
—William Wordsworth, “To the Small Celandine (Common Pilewort); To the Same Flower,” The Poetical Works of William Wordsworth, p.338
Labels:
lonely,
one reader,
pleasure,
secret book,
william wordsworth
8.11.2025
then you're in it
Best if the scene is being set without the least sound of the backdrop coming down.
Labels:
backdrop,
background,
scene,
sound
8.09.2025
afterimages
One measurement of a poem is how much memory residue it leaves behind.
Labels:
effect,
measurement,
memory,
residue
8.08.2025
word well
For a poet, each word is a well: dark, deep, full of echoes, and the faint reflection of water.
8.06.2025
algebraic lyric
The lyric poem as an expression, an equation or an inequation (borrowing terms from algebra). As an expression, the lyric poem is a gesture, a stance, an outcry, without any particular shape or resolution. As an equation, the lyric becomes fully formed, taking shape and resolving itself. As inequation, the lyric grasps about but finds no shape or resolution in its utterance.
Labels:
algebra,
equation,
expression,
inequation,
lyric poem,
resolution,
shape
8.05.2025
self-reported
As poets and artists we tend to self-report our successes and breakthroughs.
Labels:
breakthrough,
self-report,
success
8.04.2025
always be closing
At poetry readings, I’ve seen poets who can’t even sell a few copies after having read from their book(s). This should be a cause for concern. You should be able to close the deal in the room.
Labels:
audience,
book sales,
close,
deal,
poetry reading
8.03.2025
quill of smoke
The rooftop
With a quill of smoke stuck in it
Wavers against the sky
In the dreamy heat of summer.
—Norman MacCaig, from "July Evening," The Poems of Norman MacCaig (Polygon, 2011), edited by Ewen MacCaig
With a quill of smoke stuck in it
Wavers against the sky
In the dreamy heat of summer.
—Norman MacCaig, from "July Evening," The Poems of Norman MacCaig (Polygon, 2011), edited by Ewen MacCaig
Labels:
image of note,
normam maccaig,
quill,
smoke,
summer
8.01.2025
for the few
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9 OUT OF EVERY 10,000 AMERICANS PREFER CAMPARI
9 out of every 10,000 Americans prefer Poetry.
Labels:
ad,
audience,
campari,
readership,
substitution of terms
7.31.2025
contra beckett
Fail better? No, poet, fail more beautifully.
Labels:
beautifully,
charge,
fail,
failure,
samuel beckett
7.29.2025
curse of verse
Formal poems that put perfection of form above poetic essence, fail as poems.
Labels:
fail,
formal poetry,
poetic essence,
prosody
7.28.2025
offer and payoff
The sonnet works by offering a promise (or hook) in the first 8 to 10 lines, and then immediately giving the reader the payoff.
7.27.2025
fool's golden age
Now matter the glow, it’s always an iron pyrite age.
Labels:
glow,
golden age,
iron pyrite,
literature,
times
7.26.2025
too beautiful to understand
I sat in a leather rocker and read to a six-year-old girl the Browning poem, Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came.
And her eyes had the haze of autumn hills and it was beautiful to her and she could not understand.
—Carl Sandburg, from the poem "Manitoba Childe Roland"
And her eyes had the haze of autumn hills and it was beautiful to her and she could not understand.
—Carl Sandburg, from the poem "Manitoba Childe Roland"
7.25.2025
splutter poem
So much going on verbally, you’re gonna need a bib to read this poem aloud.
Labels:
bib,
consonants,
read aloud,
verbal,
vowels
7.22.2025
write your own
You realize you haven’t lived the life to write that poem, but that’s no reason not to write your own.
[after reading a Jack Gilbert poem]
[after reading a Jack Gilbert poem]
Labels:
autobiography,
block,
jack gilbert,
life
7.21.2025
a long list
Make a list of all the antisemite artists and writers. No, don’t bother, it would be too long.
[David Markson in one of his 'non-novels' called out very many artists and writers for their antisemitism.]
[David Markson in one of his 'non-novels' called out very many artists and writers for their antisemitism.]
Labels:
antisemite,
antisemitism,
artists,
list,
writers
7.20.2025
only a footnote
He wrote the kind of poetry that would never accrete any lasting acclaim but might hang on for a time as a footnote.
7.19.2025
beach reads
There are poetry books too that make for good beach reading.
Labels:
beach,
beach reading,
easy reading,
poetry books
7.18.2025
same times
The feet at which I have before or after sat include those of Heidegger, Coué, Bertrand Russell, Charles Péguy, C.S. Lewis, Whately Carrington, Charles Williams, Jacques Maritain, Herbert Read, Kenneth Burke, Thomas Mann, T.S. Eliot, Aldous Huxley, Fr. [Martin Cyril] D’Arcy, Professor [Herbert] Butterfield, Gerald Heard, J.B. Priestley, J.-P. Sartre and others too numinous to mention at random. Few men can know more than I have been told about the Contemporary Crisis, the Modern Malaise, the Present Predicament, or the Dilemma of Today. None of these things (sometimes I suspect they may all be one) seems to differ radically from the problems with which, say, Ecclesiasticus, Montaigne or Leopardi was confronted.
—Daniel George, Lonely Pleasures (Jonathan Cape, 1954)
—Daniel George, Lonely Pleasures (Jonathan Cape, 1954)
7.17.2025
to the brim
Think of the last line as a brim not to breach. Or a brim that overflows only in the reader's mind.
7.15.2025
7.13.2025
abandonment issues
Make a list of all the artists who abandoned their spouses and children. No, don’t bother, it would be too long.
Labels:
abandoned,
children,
list,
lives of the artists,
spouse
7.12.2025
7.10.2025
much worse than that
A poem that had to get much worse before it could be made any better.
Labels:
better,
composition,
revision,
worse
7.08.2025
7.07.2025
chaotic reader
This means that I am more of a chaotic reader who often avoids the responsibilities of ownership in favor of library books, as if reading books that do not belong to me grants me some additional measure of freedom (libraries—the only arena where the socialist project has succeeded).
[...]
There's nothing terribly wrong with reading "only" poetry—but there's still a shadow of premature professionalization hanging over this practice. A shadow of shallowness.
—Adam Zagajewski, “Young Poets, Please Read Everything,” A Defense of Ardor (Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2005)
[...]
There's nothing terribly wrong with reading "only" poetry—but there's still a shadow of premature professionalization hanging over this practice. A shadow of shallowness.
—Adam Zagajewski, “Young Poets, Please Read Everything,” A Defense of Ardor (Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 2005)
7.05.2025
revision of a kind
In making erasure/blackout poems, poets seldom turn to their own texts, but perhaps they should.
Labels:
blackout poetry,
erasure,
own work,
text
7.03.2025
7.02.2025
7.01.2025
6.30.2025
6.28.2025
hard work with words
If the novelist seeks the mot propre, how much more so the poet. His words are isolated, arranged in a metrical pattern, where not only the value, or values, of each single word must be considered, but also the close interdependence of one upon the other: for every word is quick to take colour from its companion, and will gain or lose in emphasis according to its position in the line. The adjustment is very delicate, the labour painful. A lyric by Wordsworth dances gaily enough: yet that stolid figure would first pace for many days up and down the back garden, "humming and booing about", and scattering scraps of paper as he went.
—George H W Rylands, Words and Poetry (The Hogarth Press, 1928)
—George H W Rylands, Words and Poetry (The Hogarth Press, 1928)
Labels:
dances,
garden,
interdependence,
isolated,
labor,
poetic line,
values,
william wordsworth
6.26.2025
6.25.2025
speak your truth
Confessionalism at its best is speaking your truth.
Labels:
confessional,
speak,
truth
6.24.2025
old new borrowed blue
For a wedding they say it’s good luck for the bride to wear ‘something old, something new, something borrowed and something blue’. This could be the model for a good poetry reading: Read something old, read something new, read something borrowed (the generous act of reading another poet’s poem), and the blue will be evident in the reading because it’s poetry.
6.22.2025
telling cover
There was a time in poetry publishing when you couldn’t just judge a book by its cover. Now it’s okay—no need to break open the book to read a poem or two before passing judgement.
Labels:
book cover,
judge,
poetry publishing
6.21.2025
obviously magnificent
You can’t explain the poem: you can’t say what it’s about, you can’t even make a claim for it as a poem, yet it manifests itself in the space of the page and declares itself magnificent.
6.20.2025
6.19.2025
pulled out stops
A poem unimpeded by punctuation.
[Thinking of W.S. Merwin]
[Thinking of W.S. Merwin]
Labels:
punctuation,
unimpeded,
w.s. merwin
6.18.2025
style is all
In Shakespeare’s later works character has grown unindividual and unreal; drama has become conventional or operatic; the words remain more tremendously, more exquisitely, more thrillingly alive than ever—the excuse and the explanation of the rest.
[...]
At last, it was simply for style that Shakespeare lived; everything else had vanished. He began as a poet, and as a poet he ended.
—Lytton Strachey, introduction to Words and Poetry (The Hogarth Press, 1928) by G H W Rylands
[...]
At last, it was simply for style that Shakespeare lived; everything else had vanished. He began as a poet, and as a poet he ended.
—Lytton Strachey, introduction to Words and Poetry (The Hogarth Press, 1928) by G H W Rylands
Labels:
drama,
lytton strachey,
poet is,
shakespeare,
style,
words
6.16.2025
6.14.2025
one and many
A poem should not be overly varied but poetry should be various in order not to bore us.
6.13.2025
6.12.2025
hard to read
Your layout didn’t improve the poem but it was successful in making it harder to read.
Labels:
hard to read,
improve,
layout,
open field
6.10.2025
what they don't say
Gamblers don’t talk about their losses and poets don’t talk about their rejections.
6.09.2025
to declare or to disclose
Too many poems declare themselves outright when a slow disclosure would be more effective.
6.08.2025
living things
Another poetic requirement, necessary to emphasize since reading and writing became almost universal throughout the English-speaking area fifty years ago, is that every word must be given its full meaning. In commercial, scientific, and newspaper prose there is an increasing tendency to use words as mere counters, stripping them of their history and force and associations—as one might use a box of old foreign coins in a card game without regard for their date, country, face-value or intrinsic value. The creative side of poetry consists of treating words as if they were living things—in coupling them and making them breed new life.
—Robert Graves, “Preface to a Reading of Poems,” Food for the Centaurs (Doubleday, 1960)
—Robert Graves, “Preface to a Reading of Poems,” Food for the Centaurs (Doubleday, 1960)
Labels:
counters,
living things,
meaning,
old coins,
words
6.07.2025
person or the poetry
It’s the editor’s dilemma: The feeling that you’re not judging the poetry but the poet’s life.
Labels:
autobiography,
dilemma,
editor,
judge
6.06.2025
prose poem test
The prose poem is the true test of a poem: Could the piece be unlineated and still be a good poem.
Labels:
good poem,
lineated,
prose poem,
test
6.05.2025
mind to paper
One of those poems of the mind that evaporates on paper.
Labels:
composition,
evaporate,
mind,
page,
paper
6.04.2025
6.03.2025
6.02.2025
capitalism's mouthpiece
A post-mo poem that capitulates to capitalism at every turn with a product placement or brand name.
Labels:
brand,
capitalism,
post-modern,
product placement
6.01.2025
poet's grave
[Scene takes place at a ruined monastery that has been turned into a prison camp]
From all others, Yakov Petrovich Polonsky chose this place as his own and gave instructions that he was to be buried here. Man, it seems, has always been prone to the belief that his spirit will hover over his grave and gaze down on the peaceful countryside around it.
But the domed churches have gone; the half of the stone walls that is left has been made up in height by a plank fence with barbed wire, and the whole of this ancient place is dominated by those sickeningly familiar monsters: watchtowers. There is a guardhouse in the monastery gateway, and a poster that says, “Peace among Nations,” with a Russian workman holding a little black girl in his arms.
[…, speaking to the warder]
“Tell me—according to the map, there’s a poet called Polonsky buried here. Where is his grave?”
“You can’t see Polonsky. He’s inside the perimeter.”
So Polonsky was out of bounds. What else was there to see? A crumbling ruin? Wait, though—the warder was turning to his wife: “Didn’t they dig Polonsky up?”
“Mm. Took him to Ryazan.” The woman nodded from the porch as she cracked sunflower seeds with her teeth.
The warder thought this was a great joke: “Seems he’d done his time—so they let him out . . .”
—Alexander Solzhenitsyn, “The Ashes of a Poet,” Stories and Prose Poems (FSG, 1971), translated by Michael Glenny, p. 249
From all others, Yakov Petrovich Polonsky chose this place as his own and gave instructions that he was to be buried here. Man, it seems, has always been prone to the belief that his spirit will hover over his grave and gaze down on the peaceful countryside around it.
But the domed churches have gone; the half of the stone walls that is left has been made up in height by a plank fence with barbed wire, and the whole of this ancient place is dominated by those sickeningly familiar monsters: watchtowers. There is a guardhouse in the monastery gateway, and a poster that says, “Peace among Nations,” with a Russian workman holding a little black girl in his arms.
[…, speaking to the warder]
“Tell me—according to the map, there’s a poet called Polonsky buried here. Where is his grave?”
“You can’t see Polonsky. He’s inside the perimeter.”
So Polonsky was out of bounds. What else was there to see? A crumbling ruin? Wait, though—the warder was turning to his wife: “Didn’t they dig Polonsky up?”
“Mm. Took him to Ryazan.” The woman nodded from the porch as she cracked sunflower seeds with her teeth.
The warder thought this was a great joke: “Seems he’d done his time—so they let him out . . .”
—Alexander Solzhenitsyn, “The Ashes of a Poet,” Stories and Prose Poems (FSG, 1971), translated by Michael Glenny, p. 249
Labels:
alexander solzhenitsyn,
burial,
death,
grave,
monastery,
prison camp,
ruin,
yakov polonsky
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