7.29.2008

airbuilt

I see little difference between poets and the inventors of self-propelled flying machines.

7.28.2008

leap or fall

There is something in art that can’t be taught: What can be taught is an approach, an address or a stance, a way of being available to what might come next. But in all art, after that, it’s the leap, or the fall, and those events can only be experienced.

7.27.2008

substitution of terms

Laws, like sausages, cease to inspire respect in proportion as we know how they are made.
—John Godfrey Saxe (lawyer and poet), The Daily Cleveland Herald, March 3, 1869.

Poems, like sausages, cease to inspire respect in proportion as we know how they are made.

7.24.2008

reader or hoarder

I fear I’ve gone from being a book reader to a book hoarder.

7.23.2008

phone sex scansion

When poets talk about scansion it reminds me of phone sex…lovers from afar aching to close the distance.

7.21.2008

wave building

Feel the line build, a wave about to break.

7.20.2008

poetry of flowers

The poetry of flowers contains no pedantry and no affectation.

—Anna Fitch Ferguson, Bits of Philosophy (1933)

(At a book sale, I found this lovely little book by a woman who lived much like Thoreau at Walden Pond: simply, with a writing implement and ready aphorism.)

7.19.2008

plain sight

Plain sight is poetry because real seeing is such a rare phenomenon.

7.17.2008

beset piece

It could be described as a beset piece.

7.16.2008

lost in its distance

A poem at a remove, is a poem flirting with the chasm in which it will be lost.

7.15.2008

word oasis

A word oasis in a language-parched land.

7.13.2008

unnecessary / essential

Poetry exists at the poles of unnecessary language and essential language.

7.10.2008

abstract critical violence

But I would raise the question…whether what I have called “matter of fact” criticisms (of which there have been a good many varieties) are not less likely, in general, to do violence to our common sense of apprehension of literature or poetry than the “abstract” criticisms I have contrasted with them. The “abstract” method , as Hume said, apropos of its use in morals, “may be more perfect in itself, but suits less the imperfection of human nature, and is a common source of illusion and mistake in this as well as in other subjects.”

—R.S. Crane, The Languages of Criticism and the Structure of Poetry (U. of Toronto Press, 1953)

7.09.2008

banal personal reminisces

Why are so many banal personal reminiscences passed off as poetry?

7.07.2008

resists paraphrase

A poem that resists paraphrase at every turn.

7.02.2008

meaning matters

The meaning is the matter.

7.01.2008

threatens literature

To write the poetry that threatens literature as we know it.

6.30.2008

in praise of vague

The Italian poet Leopardi believed vagueness was an essential characteristic of poetry, allowing the mind "to wander in the realm of the vague and indeterminate, in the realm of those childlike ideas which are born out of the ignorance of the whole."

See G. Singh's comprehensive study of Leopardi and the Theory of Poetry:"It is because the poet is attracted to the vague and indefinite, more than what is clear, concrete, and precise, that his language, even when it does not contain a full-fledged image or simile or metaphor, does to a certain extent partake of the character of an image or a symbol, both saying and suggesting something much more than what it commonly would outside of poetry." (Singh)

6.29.2008

train window

Images in a poem flicker by in fleeting transit like things seen from a train window.

6.27.2008

favorite number

A number that never fails to raise my spirits: 811 (Dewey Decimal System classification for Poetry).

6.25.2008

new improved tide

Some people say Ezra Pound first said “Make it new.” I’m pretty sure that Proctor & Gamble had that slogan long before he did. There is the ring of ersatz capitalism in that ‘make it new’ dictum.

6.24.2008

deep divide

The deepest divide in poetry is between the authentic impulse and the crafted artifice.

6.23.2008

little spells

...modern poetry has replaced the “big spell” with a lot of “little spells,” each work pulling us in a different direction and these directions tending to cancel off one another, as with the conflicting interests of a parliament. (“Magic & Religion”)


—Kenneth Burke,The Philosophy of Literary Form (Vintage 1957)

6.19.2008

recast line

Sometimes you have to recast and recast the line like a fly fisherman over a stream of sullen trout. Ever hopeful that on one perfect presentation the line will suddenly draw taut.


6.18.2008

no sense of decency

Often after reading a famous poet’s blurb on the back of a poetry book, the attorney Joseph Welsh’s well-known rebuke of Senator Joseph McCarthy comes to mind: “Have you no sense of decency, sir? At long last, have you left no sense of decency?”


6.17.2008

prime movers

Are the words being moved around by you, or are they moving you around?

6.16.2008

theme park

The poem was a theme park for words.

6.15.2008

line relationship

Finally, no particular line is valuable except inasmuch as it performs a dramatic function in relationship to other lines in a particular poem: one kind of line ending becomes powerful because of its relationship to other kinds of line endings.

—James Longenbach, The Art of the Poetic Line (Graywolf 2008)

6.13.2008

basic misunderstanding

Bad poetry begins with a misunderstanding of what poetry is.

6.11.2008

fewer better

I need to read fewer poems better.

6.09.2008

6.06.2008

serious style

Striving for a style so substantive it’s content.

6.05.2008

announce themselves

There are poets who announce themselves by how they dress. There are poets who announce themselves by the inventive ways they spell their names. And then there are poets who announce themselves with only a few words at the outset of a poem.

6.03.2008

three-dimensional almost

At one point in The Orchards of Syon (XXIII) I say ‘I write / to astonish myself’. This self-astonishment is achieved when, by some process I can’t fathom, common words are moved, or move themselves, into clusters of meaning so intense that they seem to stand up from the page, three-dimensional almost.

—Geoffrey Hill, Don’t Ask Me What I Mean,
edited by Clare Brown and Don Paterson (Picador, 2003)

6.02.2008

wannaBeats

It was a reading full of wannaBeats, but the magic of a specific time can't be reclaimed by declaiming in a similar style.

6.01.2008

cathedral and scaffolding

The poem was like a cathedral covered by scaffolding. There was beauty and wonder underneath but it could not be seen for all the critical attention.

5.31.2008

home appliance rescues poem

When confronted with a particularly abstract meditation, I want to say to the poet, “What this poem needs is a toaster.”

5.27.2008

lyric event

Because of its brevity the lyric can be an event outside of artifice.

5.26.2008

conquistador

Poet, be a conquistador of terra tacenda!

5.25.2008

music of our misery

What is a poet? An unhappy man who in his heart harbors a deep anguish, but whose lips are so fashioned that the moans and cries which pass over them are transformed into ravishing music. His fate is like that of the unfortunate victims whom the tyrant Phalaris imprisoned in a brazen bull, and slowly tortured over a steady fire; their cries could not reach the tyrant's ears so as to strike terror into his heart; when they reached his ears they sounded like sweet music. And men crowd around the poet and say to him, "Sing for us soon again"—which is as much as to say, "May new sufferings torment your soul, but may your lips be fashioned as before; for the cries would only distress us, but the music, the music, is delightful.

—Søren Kierkegaard, from “A” in Either/Or: Parables of Kierkegaard, edited by Thomas Oden (Princeton, 1978)

5.24.2008

poetry / religion

The sign in the bookstore read: ‘POETRY/RELIGION’. Yes, I thought, they are beginning to understand that only faith sustains our genre.

5.22.2008

not-for-profit poetry

There are two kinds of poetry presses: IRS sanctioned 501(c)(3) nonprofits and de facto nonprofits.

5.21.2008

blindspot

It seems I have a blindspot when it comes to visual poetry. I am vested in the fact that such a thing as a 'poem' can be made from the pure and simple resources of language.

5.20.2008

thousand pictures

A word is a well of a thousand pictures.

5.19.2008

imaginative elsewhere

Poets dream within their imaginative elsewhere. In Scotland we live with very occasional illumination, so ours is actually a rather sunlit verse; by contrast, the Spanish poet is stalked by shadow.

—Don Paterson, The Blind Eye, Faber & Faber 2007

5.18.2008

kindling

Unable to raise a flame from the kindling of the first few lines.

5.16.2008

supersaturated

The language of poetry is supersaturated.

5.15.2008

modulate this

Political poetry necessarily ranges beyond the modulation of literary poetry.

5.14.2008

sound of the pages

It was the sound of turning the pages that he remembered most about the book.

5.11.2008

multum in parvo

The phrase multum in parvo has always had a special significance for me. In its terse and compact Latin diction, it exemplifies exactly what it connotes: much in little. The archetype of brevity, however, is not easy to define. Abstraction, conciseness, symbolism, and imaginative potential are basic in the concept. A multiplicity of detail is concentrated into a unified principle, the particular is transformed into the universal, a largeness of meaning is conveyed with the utmost economy of means. This largeness of meaning should be accomplished by a dramatic impact, in a word: insight with a gasp.

—Carl Zigrosser, Multum In Parvo (George Braziller, 1965)

5.10.2008

slow to stop

The longer the poem the more extensive the ending. An epic poem should avoid rapid deceleration. Or to put it another way, a freight train or line of barges doesn’t stop on a dime.

5.09.2008

life's sake

Art for life's sake. That and that alone.

5.08.2008

airport bookstore

Walking into an airport bookstore, behind me hundreds of people streaming in all directions to this or that gate and flight, and I realize how lucky I am to know the classics from the chaff.

5.06.2008

instance unloosed

To unloose the instance without effusive utterance.

5.05.2008

words to beware of

Certain words aspire to the state of poeticism.

5.04.2008

exotic & commonplace

Eliot was from the first a poet with a remarkable range of diction, and with a natural gift for the vividly memorable phrase. He was always consciously aware of the varied resources of English poetic diction and delighted to place an exotic word exactly, or to give us a sudden shock which the unexpected introduction of a commonplace word or phrase can provide.

—Helen Gardner, The Art of T.S. Eliot, E.P. Dutton & Co 1959

5.02.2008

keeps

A poetry impossible to deplete even after repeated readings.

5.01.2008

prose poet

Prose poet: Escapee from the chain-gang of the line. He runs on, hearing the dogs in the distance.

4.30.2008

limits of spoken word

Tough emcee: He once grabbed a skin-head poet by the short hairs and dragged the guy away from an open mike.

4.28.2008

in front of the poet

In front of a new, genuine poet, you always experience the paradoxical and wonderful feeling that all of a sudden you understand a language so far unknown to you.

—Lucian Blaga (Romanian philosopher and poet, 1895-1951), The Élan of the Island, 1946

from A Blaga Anthology on CD, Dr R.T. Allen

4.27.2008

book ruins

I awoke one day shadowed by the ruins of stacked books.

4.26.2008

that word

A word you want to build a poem around.

4.24.2008

load-bearing wall

Think of each line as a load-bearing wall: If the wrong one is broken through during revision, the whole structure of the poem collapses.

4.23.2008

zeitgeist

The zeitgeist is expressed more clearly by the obscure many than by the acclaimed few. It is within the ordinary gossip and buzz, within the thousands of unacclaimed poems, that poetry takes shapes. [295]

—Alice Fulton, “A Poetry of Inconvenient Knowledge,” Feeling as a Formal Language (Graywolf Press, 1999)

4.21.2008

crowd of words

In order to reach the poetry, to the crowding words I say, “Make way, make way.”

4.20.2008

workshop character

The Ventriloquist’s Dummy: The person who practically hops up on the workshop leader’s lap, saying what he/she expects the workshop leader would want her/him to say about the poem.

4.19.2008

moving parts

A poem of many moving parts.

4.18.2008

thought experiment

The poem as ‘thought experiment’.

4.17.2008

linebreak ache

Linebreak ache: experiencing a poet execute one of those overly clever linebreaks meant to call maximum attention to syntactic meaning or a word within a word.

4.16.2008

extraordinary ordinary

"Astonishing" is an epithet concealing a logical trap. We're astonished, after all, by things that deviate from some well-known and universally acknowledged norm, from an obviousness we've grown accustomed to. Granted, in daily speech, where we don't stop to consider every word, we all use phrases like "the ordinary world," "ordinary life," "the ordinary course of events." ... But in the language of poetry, where every word is weighed, nothing is usual or normal. Not a single stone and not a single cloud above it. Not a single day and not a single night after it. And above all, not a single existence, not anyone's existence in this world.

—Wislawa Szymborska (her acceptance address for the Nobel Prize in Literature)

4.15.2008

writing and writing about

To write about poetry, I must be writing poetry.

4.14.2008

good shepherd

Poet, be a good shepherd of words! Tend them well, lead them watchfully into the bright pasture of the page.

4.13.2008

effortless poetry

It’s hard to get over the effrontery of a poem when obviously so little effort went into its making.

4.12.2008

too late now

A poem I should have encountered when I was seventeen.

4.10.2008

surface phenomena

But to fool one’s self that definitions are being reached by merely referring frequently to skyscrapers, radio antennae, steam whistles, or other surface phenomena of our time is merely to paint a photograph.

—Hart Crane, “General Aims and Theories”